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the will to carry on



If you can hold on when there is nothing left in you,
When god turns to you and says" you have the will to carry on" hold on!
When everything in this world starts to fall around you,
When all you are Left with are the broken pieces.
Only the shadow of of what you where,
Could you live with being that ghost of every man,
Would you be that will,
That says with every word you breath,
Hold on!
Your's is that will alone,
To rise above each trial and triumph,
To fall in the arms of each disaster and glory,
And treat those falls as you would in life,
Could you do the same in death.


When there is nothing left in you to give,
Only those passing dreams of tomorrow,
Will you find that reason to live,
Will today be yours alone,
Will you find that will to carry on,
When all others forsake you,
All they can do is doubt you,
Would you forgive their doubting to.
If you could could look inside me,
You would see i am not the man, you think i am,
The man you thought i was died,

I am that man you could not be,
Who found the courage to live,

when all around me, could only doubt my true faith.
This world stood against me for a time,
But through will alone and my faith,
I saw the miracle in grace,
I saw that best i could be,

And until this moment in time,

I never knew what i gave until now,
That i had so much in me, only the world could see,
The man i had become,
The man that once was, was once dead.
With every breath in silence,
I never heard him die,
All i felt where the sins of yesterday,
Quietly slipping away from my grasp.
I never knew until now,
Why that man i was died,
Only to say grace is worth inspiring to,
What ever the loss, we bare in pain,
What ever the joys, we share in life,
All we do in this world.
Is the same whether we do it or not.
Well, that is down to us as individuals,
Some see the world for what it is,
Some see the world for what it should be.
Which is right,
Which is wrong,
Who knows,
Only god knows,
You're conscience knows.
You have the will to change yourself,
Why not use that will to change others,
You have the faith to heal,
Why not use that hand of god,
Through grace, you can heal others to.

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  • Sharon Marie gold member
    September 2

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    well done

    Your words reminds of how God changes our lives, the new man within must die to self, that man of sin . Day by day we live in Gods grace . My daughter had died and before she went home to the lord God was tested her through her trials .no one knows how well we will hold up . I know During those and trials and tribulation He does hold us up.
    God love and grace is sufficient He holds us up when we feel we would go under.
    I love your words, it shows your faith a man who can God in all circumstances. Great tool for witnessing even unto death. Very creative write and speaks wisdom in a powerful way.

    God Bless
    Sharon


  • Iron Saint
    September 1

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    Excellent Brother

    What comes to mind here is 2 Corinthians 5:17 and Galations 2:20. Let Grace abound Brother. Rock On!
    Love James


  • Diablosanjil gold member
    August 30

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    hold on!
    your's is that will alone
    to rise above each trial and triumph
    to fall in the arms of each disaster and glory
    and treat those falls as you would in life
    would you do the same in death


    I love this part. wonderfully written hun. Keep the creativity flowing!