The world is closing in on me
feels like the walls are coming closer
reaching for your last breath of air
the darkness creeping in closer
shattering your happiness and you life
grasping my memories and my dreams
crushing them in his palm
and leaving the remains for me to look at
in sorrow and pain
losing feelings, love, happiness
leaving only hatred and a cold heart
for me to survive on
sinking life and love
my sprit is gone
now
I have nothing.
Author notes
hi I'm lindsay, if you didn't know. But I wanted to say that when I wrote this poem I was actually very happy. :-) I don't know why but it's very easy for me to write about happy things and sad things. This kinda has to do with my life but not entirely. There was a time when I felt like this, but I mainly wrote it for people that do feel this way. They are not alone. 
this isn't really true....but it is partially true...
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Great. Mmm...Mmm...Good! That was better than good, that was gggggggrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaatttttt! I reallly did like this!
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Great words and feelings portrayed succinctly
Well I was glad at the end to find out that you don't really feel that sad! At 11 you have a marvelous and exciting life ahead of you. Keep up the fantastic writing. You have taught me something great today. -
good job
Hmmm. To me it's kind of odd for someone to write a sad poem when they're happy. But you wrote this with pure honesty and that's what counts. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing it.
Brian
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