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Within hearts of Darkness

Within hearts of Darkness

There lies light

That light is dim

But glows strong

All it needs now is to be relit

Will you face your demons and give yourself a second chance

Can you?

Not without help



Within hearts of Darkness

There is good

And there is bad


I can say many things

I can preach and pray and carry on like some holy man seeking redemption

But thats just not me

What I shall give

Are some words of wisdom

Not advice merely words

Follow your heart even if darkness clouds it

Surrounds it

No matter what path you follow

Its not always a path to destruction



But mine is far different

Path to madness

Shall I walk

Those who dare to follow me I shall respect utmost

I jude not by your color or thoughts

By your ideals and loves

No I never judge





Within hearts of Darkness


Good lies





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  • SuccumbToDarkness
    November 29
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    I very much enjoyed this. Excellent work, keep it up.


  • Night Rose
    September 1

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    Daughter of night

    oh i love this poem and it makes me feel that no matter what i choose in life good or bad it jsut depends form the heart as u say

    sincerly,
    angel


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 30

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    I love how it was dark but you turned it around, I LOVEEEEEE the ending! So strong and profound, really makes the reader think!

    Keep writing

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