Feeling like a newborn,
I soaked myself in your love
and watched the scars - disappear.
Just being with you (makes a new me)
I find myself falling in your arms
completely changed.
Author notes
Picture Prompt - http://kosmodisk.deviantart.com/art/India-135067748
A contest entry
- Quickie Afternoon by Kathraina.
575 points, ended August 30, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I loved this poem. You said so much creatively in such a few lines!
Especailly, I soaked myself in your love and watched the scars disappear.
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beautiful write hun!
you get better and better with every post!
awesome & congrats on the shiney
Tasha
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this was beautiful hun,
congrats on the silver
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Beautiful Piece
I loved the third line...and watched the scars - disappear...
Life has a way of maiming all of us. But, if we can find that one person, whoes love is so fulfilling, that is when the wounds and scares do, "disappear".
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Beautiful.
Congratulations on your silver, and very deserving piece.
Love,
jin
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oh my, heart-wrenchingly beautiful
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Beautiful work! It makes me want to 'wake up' as well. Sigh..great read!
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great poem short but great even though it is short i think you full filled the poem meaning i dont feel you left anything out keep up the great work
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That's so pretty.
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