It snows black today
the Blindness suffered from insecurity
Hazes over the path that fades
Underneath an autumn sky.
It blows wildly today
A cool moment where I remember
That days will pass over regardless
of where and how I stand
It rains purely today
Refreshing a body and the soil
Refreshing Life itself
Regardless what the weather was before.
It snows quietly today
Pure Time, effervescent and existing
Melting away quickly, unlike the slow erosion
that I have never known.
Of sand on a dusty, beaten road.
just hope you enjoy and find your own personal meanings, as usual, comments on how you liked it or critique are welcomed, just be honest lol
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I really like how you ended this piece. The progression leading up to the end was really good. I see that sand has inspired you lately :] This is really written well thank you for sharing.
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