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Along the dirt pathed road

Along the dirt pathed road
lives the old and new
the old is not as wise
the young not so new

two different people
two different things
they live close in harmony
as their lives stay the same

the young grows wiser
the old passes on
the world it turns
and life evolves

along the dirt pathed road
lives only now the new
the new not so young
and now is growing old

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  • LylaEmoriaCullen
    October 29
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    Once again your poetry is absolutely wonderful, you're a natural...