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Changeling


Im changing,
    phasing,
    blazing with vengence

Wanting revenge upon
    this world,
    this sea of lies,
that I am drowning in

Im changing,
    phasing,
    chasing dreams I lost,
                              forgot,
                              and fought

Im running fast to stop

Im finished with my love of nothing,
                                          nothing,
                                          nothing,
                                       
                                        tra-la-la.

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