My check is always so small
I never get to go to the mall
Because my money is spent
On the bills and rent
Then I realize I have none at all
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VERY NICELY DONE, MISS MANDI MAY!
On the bills and 'the' rent
makes it flow better, Mandi May!
HE! HE!
It sounds like you're getting your check from the same place that I am getting mine - as I haven't been to The Mall - in ages - and I used to be able to go nearly every Friday after cashing my check and going out to eat a YUMMY & expensive meal, as well - to get a new Video Game, CD, Kicks, new clothes, etc.
How do our leaders expect to stimulate the economy if we can't make enough to make ends meet - never mind buying a few extra's? HE! HE!
A fine limerick, Miss Mandi! It looks like all of the reading that you did of me naughty and humorous ones has taught you how to do them very well!
Love & Peace - to you and your little ones - as always, Mandi!
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lol
great limerick touchy subject lol well not really touchy since i rarely get to touch my money either
great job
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I went to the bank with an empty tank now im stuck here coz the cheque didnt clear , no food no phone no cigarets worse yet your sick and im all alone . loved your limerick hun and you xo
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no money for this soul to see
what a shame this bothers me
i need just a dime.. to get my life
back in line...I can see no money here
awesome hugs Angel♥
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You're right there is no money to see here..
I even tried to make the background green to make it look like money.
But it got me no where. lol -
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hahaha love we will pretend this is money
love the green background hugs♥
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