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Sunshine Wishes <3

Dropping pebbles in the pond,
effects un-noticeable to our own eyes.
Sunshine rays bleed upon the surface,
shining water reflecting our dreams <3

Day butterflies, pure and white, never seem to see our lies,
butterflies turn to dark, as the sun sets on our horizon.
bye bye sunshine,
bye bye
<3

Author notes

Okay, so I wrote this on a napkin, while out with my family. It is really sunny, and I had some inspiration.

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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    September 29

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    Thiis iis overall adorable; &&and i love in the author notes how you put, "i wrote this on a napkin" ii would totally do the same, (well maybe i dont really have that talent to do soo.)

    -Shellz

  • catstar
    September 19

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    I love this. Its great and happy. I have a special thing about white butterflies so that bit was my favourite. But the entire poem was great. Thanks.


  • evil-incarnate
    September 7
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    always the best way, to write when inspiration strikes. its beautiful


  • glitterydoom
    August 30
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    awww amazing imagery
    so sweet and beautiful
    ^_^

  • Beautiful

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