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haunting me

time doesn't heal all wounds
I still hear your voice calling out,
I still hear your screams,

you're screamming for me.

you left, but
I can't seem to get away.

your spirit still haunts me.

no sanity left inside,
all that's left is pouring out,
blood shed is imminent.

I spent night after night convincing
myself that you're gone, but
it's no use, you're still here.

you're still here,
and you're haunting me.

your tears drop onto me
as I dream of an impossible future,
the one we wanted to have.

Author notes

2. my immortal - evanescence

Hope you like it! My first poem in a while. Thanks for waking up my muse!

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  • redhanded
    August 30

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    wow this is full of emotion. I enjoyed the flow. nice take on the prompt as well and I am glad I could wake the muse inside you that is always nice to know kinda what contests are good for I suppose lol. but thanks so much for entering I enjoyed your piece very much and best of luck to you in this contest and in the future
    andi
    (redhanded)