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King of Shides Fair childe

Faery childe with face so fair

through the woods her dance does dare

the Faery King forbid her heart

but know, she did her souls true part

her laughter falls like silver rain

her music did His heart obtain

his eyes caught sight of his true death

and closer drew with every breath

she saw him in his clumsy way

and danced so near then flits away

His heart once cold, and gray and dead

and was fell deep in his chest, as lead

her eyes deep blue, with gold and green,

shone bright with mischief, and teasing gleamed

her heart matched his once dead and dry

but life did grow as eye met eye

a mortal heart did rise again

in Avalon's mist did love begin

The mound rose up in midnights field

and in He walked his love now sealed

about him did they maddened dance

and race and laugh and from her face deep eyes at him did glance

"i want Him not to be distraught

His love I crave our passion wrought"

"But your father does this amor deny.

should it pursue He then must die"

"i'll take Him far to my sweet heart

through no God nor magik shall we be part"

He to did fall for childes love and want

her mind, her soul, her heart he ached

to do with madness it bespake.

"your love forbidden so I do need

upon deaths door I soon will feed.

This love I need, it will not end

against your fathers will must I defend."

"Though madness comes from Shides dark soul

I'll risk it all to her I'll go"

On silver wings did she to dance

in trees so green did burn his chance

With laughter sweet as bluebirds song

he loved her so against all wrong.

Against Oberon his fight would rage

and war with Shide for her he'd wage

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