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Good Lover

I am a great lover
I can feel where every touch needs to be
anticipate every arch into me and
see
exactly where the senses ache
to be stimulated and teased
manipulated and pleased
a trace of a finger
a lick of the lips
a nibble of teeth
pressure from arched hips
all slow and sweet
a neat zig zag of lines to define
the time we spend
building and growing closer
to exploding
all because I can get lost in us even
as I hover
just above
a great lover I am
because I read wants and
interpret love

yet with you
I doubt my skill and conceit
wonder if I'll wash out in your essence
a startling defeat
retreating back in my shyness
as my soul offers defiance against
all that I've asked for and more
I know when my lips touch yours
my emptiness will be no more
I know when you arch into me
puddles will flow from the springs between
my thighs
and the truth of all worlds
will be heard from my cries and moans
and I will zone...
fall completely
in and out of time
with all rhythm and rhyme
as I connect to the universe through you
experience life through the taste of your wetness
on my lips
quenching my thirst in the most ultimate bliss
with you... I know it will be timeless
hovering above you
every fiber of every cell of my being
will ache to kiss
every millimeter of you
and it will not be clear what to do
because your wants will be my needs

and I need...

to please you
stroke inside you
fill you as I kiss you
and twist you
so that as I love you completely emotionally
from every angle I can show you
take you
and claim you
so that if you ever leave
my mark will be stamped along
your soaked walls
luscious curves
and as movies forever
playing behind your storm fed eyes

I can hear your cries
even now
having never touched your skin
or kissed your lips
teased your buds with my fingertips
and the reaction those moans cause in me
the things they make me crave
the visions they make me see

make me wonder... make me doubt... if I'll be a great lover
hovering over you
will I be able to stay far enough away
to separate your wants from my needs
as we play
to restrain myself from pushing
you over and over again and again
stop myself from drowning
as I drink all of you in

I've always been a great lover
because I could play in the foreground
though I lay detached behind
I worry my detachment isn't possible
when I need to claim you as mine
so though I promise you will explode
release
all over me
I apologize now, should it not be as great
as it could be
should I only be a good lover
instead of great
should bliss only find you 6 times
instead of 8
should my need over power your wants
as my soul shines through
your cries pulling me in so much
I shall never detach from you

always staying...
for our moments in time...
your lover...

good, great or undefined...


JayLynn
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