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No Thank You!






Erotic nonsense
bent me over the couch this morning
and I was far too fatigued to comply
but I did
because lust lets me release
when nothing else does

I moaned and groaned
out of respect
because his fumbling ways have become boredom to me
but we've been together too long
for me to desire another flavor of creamed delight

I would not call our affection sincere
but he does know how to stroke me
in ways that tantalize those areas of private seclusion
that I only allow when time has lapsed on his score card

I lick my lips and run to the shower
before I get too entangled in the whet of his appetite
and he asks for more of nothing
to dilute my sense and cause me to be tardy for work
especially since
he hasn't performed a job in two years









Author notes

My Muse: Erato--Love Poetry


Love is not always the smooth and groove we hope for but it is bestter than not having love in your shirt pocket to pet at will.


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  • Gypsy Via Orleans
    September 8

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    What can I say except great entry. I like the way you did this. I liked your author notes as much as I did your poem. You did this muse justice with your write.
    Thank you for entering.


  • John Faulkner
    September 1

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    Your imagery is top notch..You have a true creation here..good for you..I can feel your thoughts and enotions in this write,,..I enjoy your freestyle writes..same as mine.You held my attention, from start to finish....so important in poetry..You seem to get it..Take a bow..I loved this..I desire to read more of your work..s......o goo......d

    John


  • Jalalbad gold member
    September 1
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    No thank you is a great title for this poem.

  • hehe, I agree with Nick


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    August 29
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    Truly erotic nonsense

    So much tuth in your write

    Nicely done


  • In Too Deep1
    August 29

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    A most ejoyable sensual, witty and humorous writ! I loved the flow and imagery. It is truly wonderful to see you return with muse fully charged and writing again. Best wishes in the comp

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