swans swirl on the water
train vivid across the fen
he stands under the weeping willow
a vicious wind sailing his violin notes
to skitter along the path
the opened case overturns but he will not stop
the tune so imperative
from the river cruise
they crane to watch
as their guide is unshaken
visitors from Japan point their cameras
he is focused
the swans swirl on the water
clouds rush
so still he holds the last note
and the space beyond
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I could picture this... beautiful.
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cool poem
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i could imagine it very well.
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"he stands under the weeping willow
a vicious wind sailing his violin notes
to skitter along the path"
i love this verse, very well written!!!
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'the swans swirl on the water
clouds rush
so still he holds the last note
and the space beyond'
That was my favorite. It is a great write, I enjoyed it tremendously...
Keep your pen flowing with ink that never fades...
illusion
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