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Disenchantment of The Dove Tree

Condensation caught
in clouded corners
where she waits for wings
once woven throughout
skyblue whispers;

longs to join her heart
tossed too far
from naked limbs
in search of secret gardens. 

Author notes

Prompt: photo art "Take Flight" by Miss Deathwish in 28-31 words.

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    September 18
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    Well done my dear!


  • Stirrer of Stardust
    September 15

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    I find myself quite impressed with this piece. Your word placement and usage is well executed.

    Beyond well done, really.

    Your page is most intriguing.....I shall return!

    Sincerely,

    ~ ~ Janet ~ ~


    • Blue Rew silver member
      September 15
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      Janet, thank-you for such a strong response...
      I have found Amaranthine has encouraged me to
      focus my brevity. I am glad my page invites your curiousity.
      Hope to visit yours shortly. I'm appreciative of being added
      to your list of favorites. Blue