There may be fifty blue jays a day
visiting one's yard at Prince Edward Island
in the autumn and winter months,
each one chirping characteristically uniquely,
but none of them resemble Michael Jay's trill.
Author notes
http://www.gov.pe.ca/birds/onebird.php3?number=217
I wrote this a week ago, with general associative thought; am now posting with same mindset. I usually don't chuckle at my own pieces, but for this one I laughed all day, so I think it qualifies.
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A contest entry
- Prewrites by Blue-Rose Beauty.
675 points, ended October 16, 43 entries
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Comments
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Hm.. interesting.. I don't get it.
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thx for the mistake point out. ive changed it now. It was a good poem. I didn't quite catch the meaning of it though but then agen I hav lots to learn!
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haha i did try to put a creative twist, because you asked for 'humor' not something 'silly' ... sorry, but now that the contest is closed i think i'll remove my entries.
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