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Sleep deprived heart

Sometimes I feel like I can see the future..
Used to the feeling of having a purpose...
My voice where did it go..it's gone for sure..
Music playing and just listening to the chorus..

But somehow I can't believe...
That anything will happen..
I know where I belong..
And nothing's gonna happen ..

I see perfect little lives..
Watching shadows of the clouds...
Along the surface of the ocean..
The crashing song simply sounds..

I've always tried for the best
I never wanted everything to end up so confusing
If all my life is a test
I never thought that God would find my failure so amusing

Everything's changed around, Still I'm the same..
Heart frozen in place unable to continue this game...
Writing is all that's left these days in and days out...
More I learn the more I ignore living so lame...

What is love and what's it for...
I'm stuck outside an open door..
And no one's come to get me yet...
I never got a second bet...

I fall from in out the cold..
A piece of me that I can't hold...
I love you as I loose you more..
I break outside this open door...
Catch me as I wash away..

I'm standing here not sure to step forward or back..
what I'm looking for is nowhere to be found...
its what I'm needing..it's the very thing i lack
something inside me is crying for it all...

Empty chorus, Empty lines, Heart filled noise.
The mundane tears us, Out of time, Left with my choice...
Eyes slowly close as your breath freezes..Heart stands still..
Words unspoken which voices no longer fill...

just to have one more Moon dance with you....
just to have one more Moon dance with you....

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