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Don't go

Look in my eyes
tell me
you love
me
I can't move
on unless you do.
It makes me so
sad to see you
go
but look in my eyes
tell me
you love
me
I know you have to
go
but I can't move on
unless you do.

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  • catz Moderators member
    October 12, 2009

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    We wait for those precious words from the one we love, often not realizing that their feelings may not be as deep as our own.
    And sometimes we just have to move on without that person. There's usually something better just round the corner, don't pass it by

    Dee