He could be seen poking pretty
sensual apples
with ironic quips and snarky social
commentary
arranged in cute Roman numerals
with his enlightened stick...
but one morning he grabbed the wrong stick,
the one that offended people...
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inspired by my comment exchange on Kissing Clouds by Random Goldfish
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I'm not sure whether I am missing something here. When I read this, I saw the fallen angel. I saw the moment this angel was swept from heaven. If I look at it another way, I can see something quite different and quite amusing. Whichever way it was meant, it was very well written.
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Interesting... the fallen angel... (who is in all of us, perhaps, in one way or another)... I was thinking of a guy with a slightly bigger heart...!
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Hehe
This kept me reading, for some reason I just love the wording you have :]. I loved the ending though, I had to giggle; I wasn't quite expecting that. Wonderful piece.
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thanks, I did have a young helper for the wording, however, I should give due credit in my author's notes...!
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Hahaha, oh this made me smile.
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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yes, and I'm sorry if I come your way with the wrong stick sometimes... lol (but we need to be harsh on one another, you know...
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