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Now

Before you came into my life,
My life had no direction.
Until you gently touched my heart,
My heart was void affection.
Before you colored bright my world,
My life dark gray did seem.
Until you whispered through my mind,
My mind feared again to dream.

Now that you’ve come into my life,
Our lives have one direction.
And since you’ve gently touched my heart,
Our hearts have one affection.
Now that you’ve colored bright my world,
Our world does brighter seem.
And since you’ve whispered through my mind,
Our minds are free to dream.

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  • awannabepoet
    September 12
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    Excellent rhyming poem, thank you so much for entering the contest and best of luck to you.


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    August 31

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    This is really beautiful. Your words are touching, they have a lot of love and emotion in them. Showing how life can move forward positively when we find the one that we are meant to be with.

    Welcome to Allpoetry
    I hope that you enjoy the site, and if you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask
    I encourage you to comment others and generate activity for yourself!

    Good job, keep writing.

  • hend shaheen
    August 29
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    i like the way the rhyme flows ....and the poem is so sweeeet!!