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Microscopic Dots

Floating around,
A veiled reality.
Seen at twilight,
The lightest dusk.

A single glimpse,
Of a thousand lives.
An invitation to another world,
Given by microscopic dots.

Easily seen when in a state,
Between waking and dream.
These little specks entice,
Dancing upon the gentle breeze.

Accept their invitation,
Join their journey.
Let these microscopic dots,
Show you what lies behind the veil.

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  • August Starlight silver member
    September 17

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    interesting take on the prompt. I was wondering where you'd take it and I like it. Especially the last stanza. thanks for entering and good luck.