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Acrostic~Name Poetry for SandraM.Veinot

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From:-         

              This Close to Being Near 

              & Souvenirs We Shares  

                    sonnet ccxxxv

                    sonnet ccxxxiv

 

Sincerely had our words been introduced,
although a long time since those words were we
not only we, our longed for love produced
demand was more plutonic ecstacy;
remember how the words we used to share
announced to one another like we did?
More worthy had we done, let us permit!  
Verily, I do, and still admit,
each time I see the name of M Veinot,
it's Sandra who has prompted more than not
nostalgic does one's dream it seems befit  
offered are in these words of most sincere,
to toast ourselves this close to being near!

 

 

So able I am near enough to tears,

as admirable our efforts are - good friends

not known for tact I can but say appears

delivered may more freely make amends 

rekindled from the days I saw your name,

and asked myself, "Where had I seen before?"

My intuition spoke, and we became

Voluptuous in spoken terms, and more, 

enough far wiser said, the unheard had

insured that quite a while had swept us past

not knowing can evade one to be sad 

or resting while the other in contrast 

tormented we should keep those souvenirs! 

 

 

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  • SandraMVeinot
    September 13
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    Thank you for the kind words.
    They were pertty.


  • NyteShade
    August 30

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    Beautiful worded and crafted truly a masterpiece. Though nearly all your poems are. They have a majestic like quality.

  • poets whisper silver member
    August 29
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    beautiful background and lovely tribute.

  • very smart little number here


  • TerriMac gold member
    August 29
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    Very Clever

    Not much more I can say really! a very clever clever poem

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