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[ Silvery-blue eyes ]

Silvery-blue eyes
frozen like ice
deep with knowledge
that has no edge

skin of silk
color of milk
longing me to touch
something i want so much

body formed
into mine
intertwined
to make you mine

a mind so pure
it makes me sure
that choosing you
was to be true

heart so honest
thats the best
words so true
i think i love you

Dedicated to Danny Viens (my boyfriend)

Author notes

i hope you see what i see

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  • evershine-90
    August 30

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    Bravo!

    Aww, this is soo cute Beautiful poem!! the rhyme flows really well and the picture you have created with these words are marvellous. Great job!