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Truth Revealed.

I went inside of a box,
and sealed it tight.
Regardless of what I did,
I was still discovered.


The light started guiding me

and you stood there

starving 

Author notes

Pic prompt credit - http://miss-deathwish.deviantart.com/art/take-flight-135068300

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  • PrincessOfFire
    September 26

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    Very deep! In life so many are wrapped up tight in a box, only concerned with themselves. Then thsy are awakened by a crisis, to discover they weren't the only one lacking.... Great write. I see why you won gold. Rose

  • Virgoan
    September 18
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    Loved the transgression here.

    Congratulations.


  • Swan song gold member
    September 18
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    A very wonderful write !!! congrats!


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    September 18

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    I like how you took the prompt and put an angle I didn't expect. Nicely done.