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Invitation.

Can I ask for you to join me,
for an afternoon tea?
It would bring me quite joy you see.

You say you wont come?
Am I not as important as a bongo drum,
that you can't stop by for a crumb?

Without you here in this home,
just makes me seem so alone.
Ever since I met you, is this what I've become?

Another lonely gal who lost her chance,
who got lost in your hypnotic glance?
I'm just a girl looking for a simple lasting romance.

I have my flaws.
Being shallow is what gnaws,
until there is nothing left but the straws.

You are my first blond hair,
and blue eyed judgement impair.
Oh dear, mer.

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