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Old Dog.





spring sun
the old dog departs
the fire side





Andrew Hide
02~04~2004

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Written April 2nd, 2004

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  • CIndyReed
    June 4, 2004
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    I love this Haiku, I realy can picture the old dog, I wish I could see mine grow up , hugs and kisses Cindy.


  • Menohir
    April 14, 2004
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    this is so pleasant!

  • polgara
    April 9, 2004
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    A sure signal warmer temps are coming...when the dogs want to be outside warming in the sun and not relying on a fireplace. I have an Eskie (kind of like a spitz) though...he wants the snow!


  • Ava Noire silver member
    April 4, 2004
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    Well...I am confused. :S I'll blame the blondeness of my hair and move right on along to the next one


  • Blue moon
    April 4, 2004
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    great write.


  • Edgar
    April 3, 2004
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    way 2 go

    I agree with hearts of fire...Haiku is such a fun style of poems to write, short, sweet, and to the point! well written poem i hope to read some more of your well written poems in the future...keep writin' (-'.'-)


  • SusanL
    April 2, 2004
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    Some day Andrew I will come back and really think about these little writes.. I will examine them in detail and see if they give any insight into their construction.. So precise each tiny syllable magnified... Ok off I go to read more... Susan

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