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Go Away

I hear your voice inside my head, I hear it everyday.
I try hard not to listen but it never goes away.
You say to me “It will be fun, please just come along.”
As I say “no” you grab my hand, the choice for me is gone.
I let you lead me blindly to your haven filled with bliss.
And then once I am in the room the choice for me is this:
Do I scream to draw attention and hope that someone hears,
Or just bear the pain and afterward hope no one sees my tears?
This is my dilemma while my body’s being used
And I just lay there motionless and let it be abused.
For every day thereafter, and then for many more,
I think about the things you said that led me to that door.
I hear your voice inside my head, I hear it everyday.
And I just don’t know what to do, to make you go away.

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This poem is about the incident in California that is mentioned on my page. It's the first poem I've ever written that actually tells a little bit about it, not just how much I hate him for what he did...

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  • redhanded
    September 10
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    woops forgot your applause with my long comment lol, so hear ya go

  • redhanded
    September 10

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    aww :[ so sad. but I can relate alot, as I had a similar expierence. if you ever need some one to talk to or vent or nag to ill be here for you. also my mum made me do beauty pagents when I was younger. I hated them! LOL. and now I a full out dyke, wear guy clothes and everything, for me my eating disorder is kind of triggered by her....she always wanted to control me, so within having the eating disorder I feel as if I am in control for once.

    but I am here for you if ever need be. I think you will enjoy your stay at allpoetry, if you need any help getting around the site or anything feel free to message me about that too lol

    -hugs-

    andi


  • starving4perfection
    August 29

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    aww wow that was...very well written something i tried to put in to words in my last poem but didnt do it quite as well as you
    im sorry its so strong for you at the moment and i hope you get better soon!
    im so worried about you x


  • Ah-mazing Angel
    August 28

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    whoa... this poem is everything i wanted to say put in words!!!