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Storm Overdose

Anther typical day  said I
I looked up above, way up high
and all I could see was that dark black sky

here comes the rain
try to refrain
people began to ran
umbrella gripped tightly in hand

I heard the pitter patter
Streets got wetter
making my speech harder to deliver
the rain was not the typical color


something was wrong
rain should be clear
why am I worrying theres nothing to fear!
Rain always makes me dizzy and thats why i am unclear?
sO I am Ok AN DeEr Reader DON''t yOU seE?!

Hobos on the street
praising the rain
saying it was ever so sweet
rewarding them for there pain

So WHAT IF I opened my trap
I managed a hiccup
and then I spat

the rain that I held so dear
had somehow magically turned into beer!

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  • Macsword
    September 16

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    YAHOO!

    May that ever be poet. And maybe just Wednesdays a little Italian Vino and maybe on Saturdays a little Irish Whisky! Fun write poet.


  • aboomer silver member
    September 11

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    lol - a lot of people on the streets might be happy with this one, especially those hobos...lol
    nice job

    thank you for your entry
    best wishes in the contest