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Pravolve

Through working hours
Lonely nights and
Feelings left undone
We move and smile
And grasp what’s dire
‘Til all is won and one.
Assembling assests
Lips cheek to cheek:
Move up a denomination
Smothered in falsehoods,
Giggling over crystal
Beguiling sophistication

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  • Whitefaeryofdeath
    August 30
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    Kinda lost me. Is it on the life of a rich person vs not?


    • Skawe
      August 30
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      Actually it's about how people kiss ass to move up in life - how sometimes all you have to do is stick you lips to someones ass to move up whether you are intelligent or not.


  • Fission
    August 29

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    "Giggling over crystal"

    I love it. =) It reminded me of The Great Gatsby, with all of the eloquent parties and the false dream and whatnot. What inspired you to write it?

    • Skawe
      August 29
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      A conversation I had with my aunt, it didn't really have anything to do with with the falseness of people, it just reminded me of it you could say. Lol

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