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The SLOWWW Angel

Hello little angel
How are we today?
She doesn't understand
And probably never will

Umm... little angel?
Do you hear my words?
She looks up to the man
With oblivion in her emerald hues

Hello?!?!?!
As he knocks on her noggin'
Is there any body in there?!?!?!
Still she smiles as if nothing is going on

Good lord this angel is dense
And a bit on the SLOWWW side
Bye little angel
Be good you hear?

Still not a smile, nor a glimmer of thought
Behind those emerald eyes
Of that SLOWWW angel

Author notes


Written April 2nd, 2004

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  • Loving Slave
    April 29, 2004
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    Silly rabbits.. Trixs are for kids
    Edited on Apr 29, 8:23 p.m. because ''.


  • ScorpioFlux
    April 12, 2004
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    nice
    Edited on Apr 12, 7:51 p.m. because ''.


  • Naughtygrlred
    April 3, 2004
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    pink floyd


  • ChibberMonkey
    April 2, 2004
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    Hahaha....that was great...It reminds me of my slowwwwwness...lol... great job on this! hehe
    It made me chuckle

    ~Chibbs~

  • Loving Slave
    April 2, 2004
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    Oh..wow.. your funny..

    Lilli

  • Loving Slave
    April 2, 2004
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    Better Sweets.. thanks

  • MyScorpioCurse
    April 2, 2004
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    There. How is that. Grrrrrr.

  • Loving Slave
    April 2, 2004
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    It's so hard to read your poems when you use a dark font..

    Blessed Be

    Lilli

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