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Gone



In your hand
I still stand
In your eyes
I see it all, vividally


The loss I've had
has made me gain
more insight on Love
In forgiving those  pains.


Today, I still long,
to have you near
But somehow
I see the big picture clear.


Days of tears
are behind me,
Just know that because
You are gone, yet I still hold you near.





dedicated to my Mom
who pasted away May 29 2008

have you lost a best friend?

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  • Just4u
    September 17

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    A lovely dedication sis...

    Hugs...Eddy

  • Beautiful Beyond Words...

    Truly,deep emotional write. Anyone who loves deep will feel this, you almost made me cry. Bitter sweet.

    I'm sorry for your loss...

    Elmarie


    • Ladybug
      September 17
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      thank you Elamarie, she sits very close near me today, but the tears still fall.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 30
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    what a beautiful tribute, i'm so sorry for your loss

    x


  • My Nemesis
    August 29

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    This is a beautiful poem, and a wonderful tribute to your mother. My mum died just before I turned 21 (many years ago now) and it would be a lie to say it gets easier. I miss her still. I see her in my daughter tho, in so many ways, and sometimes even that hurts. But, life does go on, and we honour them by living well and taking the good that we know was in them and making it part of our life.


  • myrataal silver member
    August 29

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    Beautiful poetry, Tamara.

    Gentle and soft, accepting the loss as a gain. She is with you always, now.

    Love to you and thank you for not forgetting me.
    Myra


    • Ladybug
      September 17
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      oh Myra, you are my Sister, far away, I read you every day, it is coming I promise...


  • Rogue-Poet
    August 29

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    I know this feeling...my mom died in April of 1995 and I still need her around, so many times I have cried myself to sleep, just wanting her to be near.


  • Xxcant runxX
    August 28
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    I'm so sorry I know how you feel my mom passed away may 31 2009
    If you ever need anyone to talk to I'm here for you

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