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My Flame

Flames spiral up and sway
dancing with my eyes
red heat on my body
we move with the wind's music

glowing like an angel
such gracious movements
she captures my orbs tonight
in love with
a creature of light
her warm spell cast over me

Ecstasy radiates
inward light
my soul flies into
flame
Pyra and I
Lines between
egos erased

Alone with my object
Enkindled
Enraptured
by
my candle

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  • sleepinglion
    September 27
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    Wonderfully descriptive, I like it, the mystery is hidden until the last line, nice.