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What Has It Done For Me

What the hell has it ever done for me
It has brought me nothing but pain
I'm alone now, in my complacency
And bitter inside cause you all leave
I've made the mistake of trying to love before I was ready
Diving back into the dating pool with nothing on
I'm drowning without a life preserver
And the boat has done sailed
Opportunity, has left
And hope is non-existent
The past I once knew will never return
And now I have to fuckin deal with it

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Written April 2nd, 2004

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  • AngelDeAmor
    April 3, 2006
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    Fuckin' ass hole dude. You suck.


  • ScorpioFlux
    April 12, 2004
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    nice
    Edited on Apr 12, 7:50 p.m. because ''.


  • heaven in handguns
    April 5, 2004
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    i like this. thought provoking.
    ~kat ...meow...


  • vampira1665 silver member
    April 2, 2004
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    Thats sad! Should take one girlfriend at a time and try real hard to make it work. Love is fickle! So are little boys and little girls. Once they "grow up" they learn how to treat one another.
    I do like your style and the words as well, very nicely done.

    Hugs and bites, Lady Raven

  • Loving Slave
    April 2, 2004
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    Don't drown... Swim...

    Blessed Be Mi Amigo

    Lilli

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