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Please... love me

The way I wanna be loved
Its not hard or a lot
its just for me
its what i want.

I want someone to kiss my forehead
I want someone to tell me good night
I want someone to not care about kissing me in front of his friends
I want them to understand my fights...

I wanna be loved like in the movies or songs
I wanna be the one they fight for
I wanna be the girl the look at and stop cold...
I want them to love me full force

I want them to give me their all
I want to dance with them alone
I want to be goofy with them
I want to show them how I've grown

Is it to hard to ask
To be loved for all you are?
This is the way I wanna be loved
Will you do your part?

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  • Hikari Lady
    September 2

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    Very nicely written, you have some strong truths in here and so many things many women would love to feel from their partners. Captivating! Thanks for entering and good luck.

    Love
    ~Noor