Wimpering and teary
you try to stay brave
what happened to you
once strong, now my slave
You wanted it as much as me
Its ok, i know, i understand
you dont need to say you want
your face red from the back of my hand
As i hold you and thrust into you
and your screams turn into grunts
i feel that you love me
even if you say that you wont
A contest entry
- D - A - R - K by skilter.
877 points, ended September 13, 101 entries
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Oh god. I don't even know what to say. Very powerful.
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Clear and to the point . A very strong voice. I would take out the "that" In the last line. and make it even if you say you wont. To me it flows smoothly that way. Nicely written. I would like to hear more.
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wow this is very dark! thank you for entering!
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Welcome to AllPoetry!!!
This is a very chilling and dark poem...abuse is wrong on any circumstances and should not be tolerated...
Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you are enjoying yourself on this site...
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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Welcome to Allpoetry!
Quite frankly, this turned my skin and made it crawl. An interesting perspective into violent attraction and relationships.
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