so many thoughts,
manuvering like a rat through a maze.
but I got caught,
in the silence on your gaze.
I can't understand what your saying,
and I don't know why.
but i'll end up paying,
with the tears i'm about to cry.
you hold on, your tears so stong, stupid girl.
you should have know he was, lying.
you say hold on, your words so strong, stupid girl.
you ahould have stopped, trying.
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not done yet! they're lyrics though.
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good to see some other lyrics on this site, sometimes i feel kinda outnumbered
anyway, i think this is a great start, good flow, great rhyming, besides a couple typos i think ur well on ur waay
keep it up, great job
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AWESOME! seriously i have no idea how people can come up with rhymes that make sense and sound good its the hardest thing ever!!!
good write!
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