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With The Light On

Bright lights
shining down on me and you
no telling how long the rain had fallen
when we woke up this morning
Rays of sun keep pouring in
deeper than the puddles it had made
by hiding away
and I woke up this morning with the light on
colors forming slowly
where the clouds were
only shadows of them fading
where the nights gone
And I
woke up this morning with the light on

Author notes

I'm not done writing this yet and I haven't written anything in about a year, so bare with me please. lol

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  • AmazinJason
    August 29

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    I was surprised to see your name on here honestly,
    it has been a long time...
    I really like where this is going,
    you should definitely write more.
    as should I... but why! I say
    as I wave good bye and fly away