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you never said hold on.


you broke it down for me.


you made it clear that the moral behind fairytales isn't that life is magical, it's that life is a struggle. ariel had to give up her voice because love is sacrifice. jasmine had to fight to make her own decisions. even alice had hell to pay in the backwards-forwards-upside down world.


you said it's not easy.


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i understand now.

i know how to make others feel what i feel without having to actually suffer through it. i give people hope. i cause happiness. i plaster smiles on their faces. because the truth is- they don't have to sleep in cars, they don't have to cringe and bite their tongues while an alcohol-scented boy lets his hands travel a littletoofar/littletoofast;


they don't have to cry themselves to sleep.








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i break down. i fall apart.
my ribs are useless.
my chest is empty.




is that what you wanted to hear?


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you never meant to hurt anyone.






























neither did i.

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  • PorphyriaLust silver member
    September 29, 2009
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    insanely intelligent

    very emotional yet smart write keep up doing godd work


  • Lolita.
    August 28, 2009

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    I loved the fairytale bit.
    so damn clever.
    I love you dear.
    try to be strong.


  • KatherineAnne
    August 28, 2009

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    Awwwwww honey =(
    This is so sad, but really astounding. I love absolutely everything about this piece.
    Especcially the references to the disney characters at the beggining. It's really unique and I LOVE it!

    "you made it clear that the moral behind fairytales isn't that life is magical, it's that life is a struggle. ariel had to give up her voice because love is sacrifice. jasmine had to fight to make her own decisions. even alice had hell to pay in the backwards-forwards-upside down world."

    These were defiantely my favorite lines.
    I can feel your emotion so well in this piece.
    I hope everything goes better for you.

    Thank you for sharing this write =)

    -Kati Anne