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Ephraim.

She was my watershed
Ever-deepening with soul so rich and succulent
Heart enough to contain all that i felt for her
On dreary days, I'd hide myself beneath her jaw
As she murmured words unheard, unsaid
Some ethereal tongue that lulled my corpse into a sickeningly heavy slumber
Any speech of mine faded toward oblivion in her presence
My Ephraim
How insignificant you make me seem
I salivate through shallow inhalations
Witness to your gilded bones

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  • annother gold member
    September 15
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    Beautiful! This is a great piece. I love the flow and word choices that create unique imagery. Thank you so much for the entry.


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    August 29
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    Aww that is a beautiful write! Great imagery and emotion! Goodluck x DD