I am Falling Back into My most Un-natural State of Being.
One of the Depressed sorts, Whom is Fucking Sick of Everything.
In Particular The ways that the Resolve Situations make Me Feel.
Like I want to Smack my Fist Against the Nearest Solid Surface.
And Let these Tears Fall Down Cold Cheeks as I Forget that I Felt..
When I Wanted Most to Simply Be Complacent,
I was Caught between Momentary Bliss and Pure Satisfaction.
Thinking Not of Your Feelings or Anyone Else's Really...
I Blindly took the Momentary Bliss
and Was Left at a Loss for Satisfaction.
It Should have struck me Sooner..
But Again I say I was Blind with Stupidity.
I Looked into Your Eyes and saw Your Discontent.
I wanted to be Back in the Arms that I Knew.
I wanted to Fucking Take Back the Insanity that I Held
That I let Slip Out In a Moment of Confusion..
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[[Please..Forgive..My..Broken..Soul]]
Tripping in Dark and Twisted Thought..What Do You Feel??
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Powerful, hard-hitting and poignant. I love the striking imagery you present us with here, painting dark pictures that show us the meaning behind each line. Part of me feels deep empathy for the narrator here, yet the other part of me feels curious to know more about the background story and the reasons that this person feels that way, but not out of nosiness, but because of the language in which you have wrote and the way you put your ideas across which leaves the reader wanting to learn more and more - yet you closed the poem off at just the right moment.
It was at once vague and fascinating, some of the best poems will inform and excite, yet keep you wondering what happened next - and that is exactly what you have done.
Well done friend, thankyou for sharing, keep up the great work!
Hugs,
Jess x
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