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"For of sugar and ice.. I am made, I am made"

With shaky fingers you piece together shards.

Attempting to glue together a shattered heart.

The winter winds are blowing in, run for cover.

Your heart's already growing cold.

I'll keep it warm tonight until the sun rises.

Author notes

title from: "love like winter" - afi

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