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Once and ago

Dark hair

dark eyes

when you looked at me that day
i thought i might die
felt a knot in my throat
because of the way you stopped my soul
so hot
so cold

A simple synopsis to make you understand
side by side
We have the same pain in our eyes
sunglasses and time








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took the picture in a dirty mirror

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