There is silence which hurts my ears,
nothing that calms down my lonely tears.
My big dark room that looms over me,
and outside the window, there's nothing I see.
Except I hear only the ringing in my ears,
the silence that I can no longer bare.
I cuddle up with thick blankets over me,
I shiver and cry, pain is what I feel.
There is silence that scares me to death,
fear overtakes my conscience and my health.
The lights that flicker outside without a sound,
the door is closed, but the silence is loud.
The window is open and the breeze flies through,
my tears are falling, for I am missing you.
Here in my bed the silence that drags,
and my loneliness without you, is making me mad...
A contest entry
- D - A - R - K by skilter.
877 points, ended September 13, 101 entries
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Comments
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i love this... almost anyone can relate to this at one point of there life wich makes it more personal to your readers...
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This is really good. Keep up the hard work
. Very emotional and dark ^^.
10/10.
Thanks for the comment btw.
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It is a global feeling ...
Missing missing missing ...
But hey! There is hope. Tomorrow may bring happiness, hmmm? 
Myra
(Ah those trophies on my page? Do not be too impressed. I am somewhat older than you, Honey, and hanging around somewhat longer ... Wink wink)
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this is very sad and very dark. thank you for entering!
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