These tears they just keep dropping on
competing against one and another
rushing out to catch up
while the heart is busy gaining pain
being heavy and ready to burst
my eyes cannot bear this pressure
theyre not ready to take it in
but these tears just keep falling off
as tears cannot see boundaries of limitaitons
honest opinion?
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I really like how you express yourself, this is beautiful. I especially liked the last line, it couldn't be any more true. A really touching piece. =)
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Wonderful job! I love the way you've expressed yourself. This was very emotional and a nice way of expressing your heart.
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