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Sweet hello

A sweet hello bellowed into my ears
The voice so familiar
The pillar to my tears

My heart would beat once,
Only to skip a beat
This girl not knowing how happy I was to hear her

In all excitement my mind got scrambled
I'm sorry I couldn't speak
My brain and mouth just wouldn't work

My voice slurred almost like im drunk
And then to hear sweet goodbye so soon

A frown came to my face I thinking what did I do

You may not realise the happiness
You alone create
But for a moment in my life
In 6 months
I finally smiled
It feels so good to be remembered
If only I could of spoken the words I wanted to say
Maybe then you would of stayed

For a friend Alisha Hall,How I wish you the best of all things. How I pray you find your happiness,and your peace. For always if you need me I'll be there,this my promise to you.

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  • patchgirl
    October 6

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    Sweet and Honest

    As always your poems are very Beautiful Joshua, I wonder though...the meaning in your peom you sent to me.....please try to get back to me...
    and oh by the way.... Here's a lil something....

    The ones who see from clouded eyes
    thier heart broken thier mind alined
    with what they think
    a stubborn soul
    with love they parted unto the toll
    Not love they shout
    but hatred wise
    And they pray to God that They will find
    and so they find with not the ringing toll
    the courage to speak out that one soft spoken
    hello

    Tell me what you percieve from this?


  • GodsRebelChild
    September 14
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    hey

    That was good and thanks i never forget my friends you have my number you ever need anything just call


  • Dark Lady Limes
    September 2
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    beautiful

    that is the most awesome poem ever and that was a good promise to make

  • Sara87
    August 28
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    nice :)

  • Sara87
    August 28

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    I quite liked this. I could relate to the 'you may not realise the happiness you alone create but for a moment in my life in 6months i finally smiled'

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