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On The Metro

Missing image
by Gregg Rowe

Midnight in Montréal
I grab the Metro
Watch men
And young strangers

In jeans
In leather jackets
In grey flannel shirts

I close my eyes
And cum
In my dreams

As I unzip
The jeans
The leather jackets
And unbutton
The grey flannel shirts

Cocks
Standing erect
Waiting
Waiting
Waiting
For the first lick
Of a shy mouth

Cocks
Standing erect
Waiting for the trembles
Of a ...

The Metro screeches to a halt

I have to get off

Author notes

METRO:  Fr.  subway system, underground train, similar to the Tube in London
Written January 4th, 2002

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  • ruminations
    May 15, 2004
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    ahh the metro

    This is wonderfull..I love dreaming of this kind of stuff...I do it a little too much...but thats ok...but this is great...

    keep it up

    heather