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Turn Of The Season

The streets billow with dust and debris.
Trees, almost bare in the late winter chill,
point accusing fingers to the sky,
while a mangy dog scratches around the shell of a car,
smelling for intruders.

From a cafe on the corner leaks the tinny echo of good times;
Brenda Fassie – Weekend Special.
Time on my hands, I stroll over to escape the high veld cold.

Inside it's warm, redolent of old oil and fresh bread.
I sit at a metal table,
the plastic cloth bright and cheerful in the gloom.
My coffee comes,
a pot of hot water
accompanied by a bowl of faded brown granules.
I'm not in Sandton now ...

Time passes slowly off the beaten track;
experience soaks into the pores rather than sparking instantly on retina.
I sip my cup of almost coffee and just breathe.

Savuka sing of a cruel, crazy, beautiful world
– to the gentle percussion of drops on steel.
I stand, pull up my collar,
and go outside to watch the dust wash away.

Author notes

First time on All Poetry for months, currently reading "Ruthless Fidelity" (Douglas Livingstone) so was inspired to write again.

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  • This piece brought me into the moment. Saying that this is 'great stuff' doesn't do it justice but it's all I can muster right now.


    • Tattboy silver member
      October 8
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      First time on AP since I posted this.

      Thanks a lot for the comment