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Sky High

Way up in the sky so high

 

that is were I learned to fly

 

wings spread wide right by my side

 

I'll make you think I can glide

 

it's sure fun to play outside

 

come along  don't run and hide

 

put a sweet smile on your face

 

show me that you're full of grace

 

come along and play with me

 

you'll have fun just wait and see

 

in the sky's the place to be

Would you read this to a child? What do you think?

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  • Topnotchsy
    October 17
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    Lovely children's poem. The language and feel are work very well for kids. Nice write!!


  • SteveS gold member
    October 4
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    What a nice poem! I think it serves to inspire and empower a child who reads it. Really smooth.


  • windsong721
    August 29

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    Wonderfull!!

    I think this is an excellent piece of art and especially for children, I feel like it has a deep spiritual value, and as a child grows up, they will understand the words even more, its just truth in our souls that lead us to higher places and the sky is NOT the limit, its only the beginning of the heights we all have the potential to reach. Its just the kind of thing I write about and can relate mostly to . Thank you so very much for sharing this piece, I think it's so great!!
    Windsong