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the brave hamster

bytheway I like hamsters
especially when they eat sticks of uncoocked spagetti
and look immensely musical

but was horrified
waking up with a hamster-face
sore teethand the inability to open my mouth
which I am sure is all husband's dream
did however go to the dentist
where I could not be checked with a closed mouth
wonder why.....
did get persciption for antibiotics
and was send for a special panoramic ex-ray
well after 2 days of antibiotics
at least can open mouth enough to brush front teeth
teeth at large are always a pisser anyway

apart from that had 2nd driving lesson in funny car
started argueing with teacher already
though he is kind of cute
and of course right

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  • Bob Fox
    September 9
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    Poet

    Lol and the poem is a 'pisser' for sure. watch out for those sharpe teeth. Smiling here.


  • lilangelsnemesis gold member
    September 7

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    Very different indeed...

    I like poetry that is unique and original, as I found this one to be both. I just had this happen to myself recently as well. Spent 2 1/2 days in the hospital on heavy antibiotics every 4 hours so I can relate to this poem. I find it ironic that everyone kept telling me I looked like a hamster storing away food for the winter. Definitely very cute and amusing.

    lilangelsnemesis


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    August 29

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    hamsters eat lettuce silly not spag bol
    i like hamsters,[ but cant eat a whole one] does the dentist charge less for people who look like hamsters