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Together in dream

When bodies can't touch
When lips can't be locked
Our eyes close into dream
We travel into each other

Joining in dormant minds,
in a magical realm our own
No one bothers us in dream
as we live amongst the stars.

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  • Kathraina silver member
    August 30
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    so much truth written here


  • on the beach
    August 28
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    you're right


  • Antipodi
    August 28

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    The ultimate out of body experience ...beautiful words dear poet


  • crivanea silver member
    August 28

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    very cute..a beautiful take on the prompt...just dripping with sappiness


  • glenn shannon silver member
    August 28

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    i do belive we can touch in dreams ive touched and been touched and this poem touches me too and im wide awake its lovely Bev .

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